All Comments on 'Everything You Want Ch. 03'

I've been checking every day religiously for this next chapter !Thank you so much! For making it longer,for making it so intense! Worth the wait,please write more!

This stories getting good! Give me more! Loving Conny, he's hot. lol

OMG I need more, gotta have more. It's getting intense and the plot is thickening. I am soo anxious for the next installment its ridiculus. Oh yeah and thanks for the quick sneak back to Dex and Roxie

that's what I am talking about...the game is is on! great Update More Please!!!!!

INconsistency in time: Is it Nov or Dec?

Other than that, it\\\\\\\'s really good!

I so want Connor to get his woman, Ang better not be too hard on my man, additional chapter was marvelous. Oh, Charlie good angst, but glad thoughts of Connor held her back cuz Connor is the real thing. JV

I really love your writing, the best you have written is the sequal for the sisters. Please write more. Woot!

I loved his sweet drunken confession of love! So wonderful!

I love all your stories. I did find it a little disconcerting because I thought Mercado was an Hispanic surname and Charlie's mother was Puerto Rican, his dad Italian. Maybe his name should have been Charlie Morelli! O.k., o.k., so I'm being anal! A small hiccup in an otherwise flawless and fun read! Keep it up!

just realized that the roxy and dex from this story are the ones in only you.

were written well. i really like it. not too mushy and very in-character. love this chapter. i'm so teary eyed right now.

Fight!!!

That's right! Anything worth having, is worth fighting for! I love Connor, drunk or sober and he has and will always love Angie! Yeah for love!

That was quite the drunken reveal, but so sweet!

your stories invoke emotions in me man! dang!

Awesome!

She better realize what she has before he's gone