by davine
In this fantasy world Eve becomes a lush sex slave. She is well taken care of as compensation and that Master sure loves variety and proves to have a stamina that would scare some of us. All in all the two chapters make me think there is more to this story. I imagine Eve denied of her orgasms as she completes her tasks. You've portrayed her as a lustful obedient...I wonder...Is she? Apparently she is only being initiated. No signs of rebellious thoughts. Is she that...submissive? Considering she hasn't had the chance to indulge in many sexual encounters....Please release me from this tension! I must know what happens to her...why she really wants this job so badly...gah! More, please!
Your use if the word "cunny." It's childish, and as this is not DDLG it really shouldn't be here. I know it's supposed to be cute, but as a reader it detracts from the story. This being an adult site, please use adult words, like cunt or pussy. Eve is supposed to be a woman, so please get your characters straight and put some thought into your word choice.