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All Comments on 'Ex-Benefits Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wordy

over descriptive , wasn't sure of the POV . 1/5 will pass on rest of chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

"over descriptive" for readers with really short attention spans, maybe. I think you were right to spend the time on setup.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

I fucking loved it highly appreciated

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Once a cheater always a cheater, won't bother with the rest of the chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A Cheating a spawning

it all started here,the thrill and temptation to cheat .

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
ONE WISHING AND WANTING

the other hoping and thinking, both of them" What Next" TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Her father chased Marlon from their backyard with a bat...and she understand that beast of a father? Where this came from?. My goodness!

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I dabble in writing and drawing. I enjoy writing descriptive scenes, fantasy stories, interracial, and multi-somes. I post erotic drawings on HardwoodComics.blogspot.com I also post art on andyvines.deviantart.com