All Comments on 'Ex "Q" Me! Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not much of a seduction, is it?

I expected a bit more of a seduction effort by the teacher. Instead, it was like, "Hey, intern, help me carry something out to my car" followed immediately by two women making out together. Where's the creativity in that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Why not just start with them in bed?

The seduction was so perfunctory that it destroyed any credibility. Simple dialog, "Q said ... then Kristen said ... then Q said..." gets pretty dry - need more meat around the bones.

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