All Comments on 'Excuse Me Miss... Ch. 04'

Where is the next chapter?!?!?!? We have to have some follow up on this matter! Thank you very much! Lol!

Seriously, I would love to have at least another chapter for these two. I think he might have the makings of a good husband of you give him some more time and writings!

Good writing and character development, I hope to see more.....

Both Jeremy and Alicia have come too far she needs to feel the love he has for her and he needs to make her feel loved after that ahole dumped her. She seems to be afraid to commit to him but that night he saw love for him in her eyes. PLEASE give them and us some closure. At least one or two more chapters !!!!