by Kalypso
too short. the setting should be more subtle. not too obvious. like wearing a see through dress like that. or spreading her legs so her pussy is viewable to everyone. sheesh. subtle! nobody does that obvious at a public restaurant. so it doesn't really makes sense more like a fantasy story. sthus less enjoyable coz not too believable. maybe they had a private room and he took off her coat then only people can see the see tru blouse. like maybe they forgot to close the door to the private room or something. so people can see unintentionally. then maybe the waiter join in too. a nice threesome ending.
Very sexy was a little to short. I wish somehow others in the restaurant got involved or maybe the waiter
Nice story, only downside was it finished when it did. I feel like Madie, wanting more ;) I'd love to see a longer version with more buildup and more detail about the restaurant encounter if not taking the story further than the current ending.