All Comments on 'Executive Platinum Ch. 03'

Interesting chapter. I could tell you were one of the characters in your own story. You need to remove yourself more, as I noticed a few small typos, unlike you.

Nonetheless, the dialogue, as always, is engaging and your characters interesting, especially Gloria. I love her.

I see so many possibilities as to where this could go! Their fantasies, Janet the neighbor woman - we don't know yet how adventuresome she is, but maybe her fantasy is similar to Gloria's, and maybe even similar to Jim's - even though the women aren't twins.

I love the explanation of Gloria's gradual introduction to good sex. It's so drawn from real life! My experience has been that we're not born with sexual skills, they are developed over time either with the help of a good teacher, or through plenty of exploration, experimentation, observation, research!

And it's a skill set that should be shared with those who are still learning.

I love a woman who talks dirty (lol).

what a way to begin a new friendship. TK U MLJ LV NV

YESSssss..!!