All Comments on 'Executive Platinum Ch. 09'

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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERover 13 years ago
Great series

Another great chapter from a talented writer.

The dialogue is exceptional. I felt I was there evesdropping in their conversation.

Well done. I shall look forward to the next chapter.

I gave you a 5 vote, of course.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 13 years ago
A new definition...

...of oral sex. Thanks.

HikergirlHikergirlover 13 years ago
Yummy!

You had me squirming :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More Please

You really need a chapter having Melissa, Gloria, and Jim vacationing together and getting it on. Gloria has already admitted her attraction to her daughter, and the banter between Melissa and Jim show a great interest there between them. A little incest would be a whole world better than having Jim and/or Gloria cheat (the interludes with the neighbor lady are mercy fucks even if they are nice, and Gloria should endorse them).

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
#2 WHY DO MIRRORS NEVER DISPLAY THE TRUTH

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Started writing as submissions on the old Voyeurweb.com bulletin boards. Found I had a bit of a knack for stories that people like, and just continued. I love to hear back from readers when they like a story, or with story ideas, suggestions, or just discussions on anything.

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