by BenLong
Another great chapter from a talented writer.
The dialogue is exceptional. I felt I was there evesdropping in their conversation.
Well done. I shall look forward to the next chapter.
I gave you a 5 vote, of course.
You really need a chapter having Melissa, Gloria, and Jim vacationing together and getting it on. Gloria has already admitted her attraction to her daughter, and the banter between Melissa and Jim show a great interest there between them. A little incest would be a whole world better than having Jim and/or Gloria cheat (the interludes with the neighbor lady are mercy fucks even if they are nice, and Gloria should endorse them).
only what they see. TK U MLJ LV NV