All Comments on 'Expectations Ch. 01'

by LiquidFyre

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What a story?

Please write a part 2. I love stories that deal with blacks females and white males. Interracial Love stories i love to read. I'm a black female who is dating a white male.

Please write more.

LiquidFyreLiquidFyreover 18 years agoAuthor
Part two submitted

I've submitted parts two and three (part three does not deal with interracial relationships) hopefully they will be posted soon.

cocobrown62cocobrown62over 18 years ago
Sexy!!!

Very sexy story....enjoyed it alot can't wait for the next chapter.

toffeegyrltoffeegyrlover 18 years ago
great work....!

I can't wait to read more -- your characters are easy to get into. :) Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Good Start

It seemed like more personal details were missing from Aisha and her lover. Aisha could talked to Edwan about her personal life while they were eating at the Mexican place. In addition, it seems hard to believe that the two of them didn't talk about anything special especially since Edwan saw other couples making out. Why didn't Aisha say anthing about dating outside her race?

Overall this is a good start :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I loved this story

I had no ideal where the storyline was going especially once the male room mate pointed out that his best friend and his girlfriend were coming to town for a visit but after seeing where it was headed I was extremely happy.

I love the masterbation part because it is very arousing as a woman to watch a man masterbate while looking at her.

After reading that I have to go and make out with my husband.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
for getting rid of the boring old style of story

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roseloveroseloveover 10 years ago

I need help. I dont no whtz it called but its a black women n a asian man that date n the mom did lik her at first and she got preg but it was with the guy before him. One more i think its bw/wm its about a girl who ran away from her ex to a farm far away n found other guy n she was lik the person that kept up with the money n one thing that happened was that a mean guy that overly liked her almost raped her but she was fine n he was fired. If ANYONE can help plzzz tell me email me plzz. Thx

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

I don't know why it seemed like their coupling was random or rushed but it just did.. felt like it went from innocent question to oh were gonna have sexy time.. lol other than that tidbit chapter two here I come, no pun intended.btw marnie is a prick

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOW!

Well they did not really have sex but that was fast. I hope the love will grow in a slower pace.

lovelyleo21lovelyleo21almost 10 years ago
To roselove

The second story you are talking about is a JazzMathews (spelling??) story I believe. "Ranchers callous heart" I think! I've never read the other one so I can't help there...

black_maestrablack_maestraover 9 years ago
For Rose...

The 1st story u mentioned is called Velvet Roses (I think by virgofemme). Am/bw and yeah his mom didn't like her. Plus recently the author through in a another different story with the same characters.

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