All Comments on 'Express Lane Ch. 01-02'

Please write more

ooooh i like it a lot honey keep on writng . it make me think of the man in my life.

I am really enjoying all your stories and can't wait to read more from you.

This is very interesting and i can't wait to see where it is heading.

GREAT START.

I liked it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

BEAUTIFUL START. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!

It's so hard to find good interracial fiction with an actual plot and loveable characters on this site, and I'm so happy I've found this! I liked it immediately! Can't write anymore as I see there are more chapters. Oh, and Latino is used to describe people from South America or Latin America and people with spanish blood, but not people from Spain; hope that helps. Can't wait to read more! Oh and I LOVE LOVE Rory, Larissa, Noah, Jo and James in that order:}

Skipps.

Very good story please continue It.

Love the characters and steamy sex scene.

That is a very tangled web sugar... don't envy you at all