All Comments on 'Express Lane Ch. 04'

Gosh...I've missed Noah sooo much. Love the update.

I love Noah's character. I hope that we will be able to read more about him soon. Nice twist on the story with Noah is taking care of his little brother.

I like both Noah and Larissa, Crystal/Silver is amusing. :) I don't see why you need to switch from first to third person POV, though. Seems like it would be easier/better/smoother if it was just all 3d person, although the 1st person is well done.

Wow...I have missed these two. Thanks for the update.

keep it up this is great

Great to see the next chapter. I love all your stories and enjoyed reading this one. Thank you.

Thank you so much for the update. i was seriously giving up on you. Can't wait to hear more of Noah and Larissa

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Crtystal/Silver is she a stripper now? I know that she comes from money but who changes their name to be called Silver unless you are a hooker or stripper. Noah and Larissa playing Twister was cute. I see it didn't take James long to move on which was probably a good thing for him. Thanks

Much better than the previous chapters.

I am so into this story... Sorry it took me so long to read it!!

This story had got my heart all twisted. Lol

Really silver, where did that even come from..she seems like a poser