Ezmerelda Loses the Bet

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She didn't see Dan's girlfriend. What she did see was a candlelit dinner, with Dan, now dressed in pants and a crisp white shirt, holding a chair out. She looked around and didn't see anyone else and looked back at him curiously.

"Who is your guest for dinner?" she asked.

Dan smiled and pointed her toward the chair. "I'm having a Queen for dinner," he said.

Slowly she came to the realization that Dan's guest was her, and she couldn't hide the surprise on her face. She sat down in the chair.

"You look beautiful," Dan said. "And also a little confused?"

"Well, I just...I thought you were going to have a...guest...I mean, I thought your girlfriend was coming and I was going to be your waitress."

Dan slowly grinned. "I thought you looked a little mad," he said. "Sorry about that. I should also probably tell you the truth about the whole girlfriend thing. I don't really have a girlfriend, I just made that up because I thought it would be easier on you to not cheat on your boyfriend."

As the words sunk in, Ezmerelda looked back into Dan's eyes and gradually developed a wry smile.

"Believe it or not, that makes sense," she said. "I know, because I broke up with my boyfriend last week, the day after you were at my place. I didn't say anything for the same reason."

The two of them sat still at the table, looking at each other and letting the words and the consequences sink in.

For a long time, not a word was spoken, but very gradually, they both began to smile. Both of them were imagining the many things they were about to do to one another. And both of them realized what the other was thinking.

After a solid five minutes had ticked off, finally Ezmerelda spoke.

"So what'll it be, my King?"

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anubeloreanubeloreover 6 years ago
the only possible reason I can fathom for this story having such a low rating is

that you haven't finished it, and it's been years. But I think that's a silly reason to rate a story poorly, so this lovely tale gets a well-deserved 5 stars from me. I do think it would have been nice if the single status of the characters had been revealed earlier, but that's just because there's no third installment, and I really want to read about these two having sex. My libidinous desires aside, I really enjoyed the way you fleshed the characters out a bit more in this installment of the story; learning that Ezmerelda was a bit of a "handywoman" was a cute little insight into the character, especially. I'd really enjoy a sequel to this piece, assuming it didn't turn into an orgy or something similar, at least. Maybe a simple consummation, and a "happily ever after" sort of thing? I have a great fondness for low-angst, fairly unambiguously positive endings. This one came close, but they still haven't made love! Either way, though, it's a nice, well constructed tale that I'm glad to have read!

-Anubelore :-)

domelaterdomelaterabout 7 years ago
Fun to read

Your story has a good steady pace and was fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Really Hot

More, more. He's a nice guy. She has more of an edge, but still likes submitting. I'd love to see them submitting to each other and switching.

motordaddymotordaddyabout 11 years ago
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This story is too good to let die off here. Come up with more stories of the two. They could become a real 24/7 DS couple or maybe even a pair of switches.

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