All Comments on 'Face to Face'

by Soul Siren

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Unreal

And altimtely

kinkybubbleskinkybubblesalmost 20 years ago
love it

i loved this story....you told it so beautifully....and the emotions...i put myself in this story....thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful

A Wonderful story!, well written with passion and tenderness. loved the realistic view of how they viewed each other. very entertaining :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Pleasure and Pain

What a wonderful, sexy and erotic story. As I was reading it I could feel the erotic pleasures and final paragraph or two sent waves of pain through me as I felt for him. I wish that it had been longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
very very nice

so much passion and so real.

very well written with an emotional twist at the end

nice to get away from the beautiful women and the handsome guys

i loved it and please write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
hot

i felt horny while readin it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You managed to blend that magic (yet elusive) combination of erotic, sensual and passionate. Sadly, most of the writers on this site manage to miss these essential qualities altogether. You respect your female character and this shone through beautifully.

I am not sure about the infertility issue was quite right and as a theme this seemed to be hastily deposited into the story and this didnt fully work.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous