by Soul Siren
i loved this story....you told it so beautifully....and the emotions...i put myself in this story....thanks
A Wonderful story!, well written with passion and tenderness. loved the realistic view of how they viewed each other. very entertaining :-)
What a wonderful, sexy and erotic story. As I was reading it I could feel the erotic pleasures and final paragraph or two sent waves of pain through me as I felt for him. I wish that it had been longer.
so much passion and so real.
very well written with an emotional twist at the end
nice to get away from the beautiful women and the handsome guys
i loved it and please write more
You managed to blend that magic (yet elusive) combination of erotic, sensual and passionate. Sadly, most of the writers on this site manage to miss these essential qualities altogether. You respect your female character and this shone through beautifully.
I am not sure about the infertility issue was quite right and as a theme this seemed to be hastily deposited into the story and this didnt fully work.