All Comments on 'Factors of Change Ch. 07'

GREAT chapter!!!!! You keep me on the edge of my seat, absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much for not forgetting us ;) . I completely understand how life can take over, so no rush in the next one.....PLUS........*giggles* if you feel guilty about how long it's been maybe we'll get another long chapter! :D

Loved it! Have a happy new year!

You bring a new and different perspective on werewolf fiction. I can't wait for Chapter 8!

Could you please translate the French words? I know a little since I studied some in high school but not all readers will know.

Your writing is beautiful!

Could also be WHEN they got turned and not by WHO.

I like the way you describe the mating bond taking effect. It's the first time I've read it described. It adds a lot to the story,well done.Looking forward to how she's accepted in the pack. Great chapter

Merci, Merci, Merci.

Je comprends complètement que la vie prend priorité mais S.V.P. continue quand tu auras le temps. I love the story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Montréal Fan.

Tee hee I couldn help myself! Loving this so far I had the same penny drop moment just as Leah and gab twigged to what had happened! Very nice twist! Now let's go kick some rogue ass! :D

You imagery of the alpha bond was outstanding. I've spent a lot of timer reading stories such as these and have never before read a description such as yours regarding the alpha bond. Bravo!

Hope to read more soon ;)

Thanks for posting!

Wonder how Cedric will take the news that his big brother is the one who turned her and killed her friends.

I hope life grants you and your muse time to craft future chapters. This story is compelling and romantic.

aaah lovely story! Just read the whole thing in one sitting.

While I'm excited to see more, whenever you manage to write it, I'd like to say that as a college student and a fellow person who (in my case,attempts to) write(s), I'm very familiar with just how long of a prices it cam be,especially when you're busy and turf and have family and other obligations and...

What I'm saying is, take care of yourself. I'm sure you planned to anyway, but I dunno, just wanted to vice my support in such a way.

Finally, that's a very nice explanation to questions i just had assumed would be answered by faaaaaaate--that is, why the two main characters managed to be mated Turned weres, why the two fatefully soul mated happened to be do close in were-age (had thought they'd turn out to have been Turned at near exactly the same time) and how they just /managed/ to find each other by basically chance. I hadn't actually been able to voice these critiques until just now, and I'm fairly sure they're about all I'd have had with the story, heh. But yes that's a long wronged and somewhat of f putting easy of saying nice job!

A definite change from some of the Were stories around here but just as compelling! I am loving what I've read so far. Doesn't matter how long you take to finish this. I'll always check back to see if you've updated chapters. Good luck and keep on writing :)

Dear MarieLyne,

You do an excellent job of answering the questions your story brings up in the reader's minds, then making more appear. For example, making the bond between your two main characters firm, and then bringing yet another aspect to two turned wolves that draws what we believe to be questioned. You have a definite flair for the artful twist in plot, but you do it in such a slow way that makes it easy to read. I am sorry that I have not been able to comment or read sooner. My work for the past few months has kept me tired, cranky and sick. I look forward to what you write in the future.

Sincerely,

PB

P.S. 5

If you don't continue writing it will be a crying shame. I so need to find out what's going to happen with Joe and Marie.

Really fantastic story, I hope you're able to post the rest soon.

A nice slow build, with well built, interesting characters, and just the right balance between surprises and predictability.

I read all 7 chapters today, and cannot wait for the eighth. Please hurry.

Three months no new update.

I hope that changes soon :-((

You are my favorite type of author, the type that continues their great stories. It is the best feeling in the world to go through your favorites or to just come across a story that you have started to read and find an update. So thank you for continuing this story and can not wait for the next chapter. We all understand time constraints with family/work/study and if people don't, well they need to learn to think don't they.★★★★★

I just came across your stories a few days ago and read 2 per day. The imagery was beautiful and had me right there in the moment with them! I hope all is well with you and home, and I hope to be reading many more stories from you in the future! :)

you story is awesome!! you should have a book or more!! i mean it.. or you Really a writer??

BTW its really cool story..

I have read chapters 1 through 7 three times now and each time lose all sense of time. I cannot put your story down. I need to know what is next. Please update .

I absolutely adore the characters, even as my heart breaks for them. I hope you get a chance to finish the story soon!

Your writing is eloquent and has such flow. There is real talent here if only you would continue to showcase it.

Please continue writing. I started reading it last year and checked back to see if you finished it. I'm so disappointed that you haven't continued the story.

Should be a special circle of hell for authors who don't finish their stories, especially the good stories like this.