by Oldguy45
It's like there's meant to be either a page three or a second chapter, but you simply decided not to bother.
A proper end would have gotten you five stars, as-is, only four.
I liked this story very much. But I have to agree there seemed liked there should be more. But i give five stars.
How could someone who is absent all day interrupt his studies? How is the landlord's vitality linked to the fairy? Is she the fairy? Are they spiritually connected? Will she continue downwards in age? Will he end up with her? Will she ever admit that she knows about, or that she is, the fairy? Come on. Keep writing.
I liked this story. There are a few things left unanswered though. I hope there is more to this.
You write well and the story was a lot of fun. But I feel that this is one story that needs to be continued. Where will their relationship ultimately go? Why is she bound to the house? Where is she during the day? Why is the landlady so happy?
Please write more! I'm a hopeless romantic.
It's not often you find a tasteful romance story like this with the added bonus of faeries. I loved it and hope to see more.
Sorry. Accidentally hit one star as I was scrolling and it would not let me change it.