All Comments on 'Fairy Tale Fantasy: Beastly Legend'

DC:

I gotta tell you I loved it. It read well, the flow of the story was great with two exceptions, but the overall effect made for a wonderful tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Ronnie...

I can't believe I left that line out!!! I'm doing an edited version that will correct a few things I noticed and then I will be sure that they live Happily Ever After... now about Hetta and Daniel... we'll just have to see.

Thanks for the comment... *mumbles... can't believe I forgot that line!*

~DC~Red

What a wonderful erotic version of Beauty and the Beast. Great job. Although I was a tad bit confused about the ending where they were referring to "him" like there was another person involved.

This is the corrected version... the explanation at the end cleared up and the most important line ever... Happily Ever After. Enjoy and thank you to all the folks who have emailed me with their comments concerning the Fairy Tale Series as well as those that leave public comments. Thank you ~ Red

Very confusing...I got lost half way through the story and quit reading it all together. I know you can do better then this!

Being a romantic makes me appreciate this hot sweet twisted story. Yes you've entertained me. Looking forward to reading happy endings for the last two characters.

thankyou for this lovely rendition. Very hot, and still hearwarming!

Great rendition of an awesome fairy tale. Got any more renditions?? Keep 'em cummin.

I am not sure it is exactly non-human but it is well written. I Hope you will try again in the category.