Faithfulness in Fargo

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"I am sorry I doubted you, Joe."

"AJ, it's my turn to spout off."

"No, Joe, let me finish. I know your secret, now I need to tell you mine."

"OK, AJ, keep talking." I let her go on because I still hadn't formed the words I wanted to say about her betrayal of our marriage. I will still deciding if I was going to leave her or if I was going to kick her out.

"I can't think of a subtle way to say this. I will be blunt. Twenty years ago I let my brother screw me.

Before I could bust in with 'You've been fucking him for twenty years?' she continued. "MJ wanted to do it again a few weeks later, but told him to wait. I made him wait twenty years. Joe, I am sorry." Tears started flowing. "MJ and I made love this morning."

I was dumfounded. I came home ready to pounce on my cheating wife, and now I suddenly felt bewildered. I did not expect a confession without a confrontation.

"Why?" I don't know why I asked why, but I did. Go figure.

"Joe, I don't know. Yes, I do know. It's not simple to explain, but I will try. First, I was getting revenge on you and that woman you were so cozy with at the karate place. I was feeling horny, too. But, I suppose the main reason is that I love my brother and over the years I have remembered our first time and fantasized about having him again. I could resist each of those three things, but I cracked when they combined."

"What happens now?" I asked "Are you going to keep fucking your brother?

She looked shocked. "No, Joe. I had my fun with him." Then a cute little grin showed up on her face. "But maybe twenty years from now I might try it again."

She came over to me and sat in my lap.

"I need double forgiveness. Please forgive me for doubting your faithfulness. Please forgive me for my unfaithfulness."

"AJ, I came back to get my wallet this morning. I saw you with MJ. I was conflicted about what to do. When I came home this evening I intended to confront you, but you confessed before I had a chance."

"You knew?"

"Yes, and I was angry and hurt. I do understand though. When you called my sister I realized how a brother/sister love could be sexual. I need to share my other secret with you. Mary and I never went all the way, but the summer after my high school graduation the two of us did a lot of things to get each other satisfied. We always both wore girlie panties when we did."

"Joe, do you think you could model a pair of these panties for me?" She held up the shoe box. "Better yet, could we go into the bedroom and do some of the things you and your sister did?"

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Author's note. Edgar Allen Poe once wrote that his stories started with the ending. He would then write the rest to lead up to the climax. I had an ending in mind when I started this story, but abandoned it along the way. It was one of those 'torch the bitch' and get revenge on the lover endings. I enjoy reading those, and I know from reader comments to stories that many others on Literotica like those endings, too. There are at least three other types of endings to cheating wife stories: reconciliation, willing cuckold (acceptance), and hanging (apparently incomplete). It does not seem to matter which kind of ending an author chooses: there is someone out there who hates it, and someone who loves it. As you can see, I opted for the hanging ending this time.

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26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Totally

Well, that was one totally fucked up price of crap, and that's being nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Reputation

With his reputation for attracting women, he should have dumped the temperamental bitch and moved on to some one else.

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 7 years ago
Hanging would be a good ending for this story.

"By the neck until dead" would be good enough for MJ. IMO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
F'd up

man this is one F'd up sorry story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Too many secrets

For this sorry tale of cheaters to even be plausible. Not one of your characters elicits even a shred of emotions from the reader. They're just there on the page, doing silly things. Maybe an editor might help.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Crazy Shit

Hey if that's what you're into more power to you. I just wish I hadn't read about it.

HA Ha ha

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
DIRTY JOE

fulfills his namesake. TK U MLJ LV NV

CoffeemuggCoffeemuggabout 12 years ago
Joe in other stories

The incest and panty fetish made much more sense after reading two other of the author's stories. They were published in categories other than Loving Lives. There's "My Sister's Panties," and erotic story that depictes Joe's love of panties. There's "Best Since My Sister" in which AJ has sex with her brother MJ. Ohj, Joe might have been a more likable character if it were Bill or something -- someone other than the panty hound in "Hi, I'm Joe."

It is interesting to note that the stories in the non-loving wives categories got higher ratings than the Loving Wives ones. Loving Wives readers must be a tough audience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
weird weird weird???

I knew in emails that the chick was crazy but this takes the cake.if she was still married to mark would this have happened? doubt it. so the chick and joe need serious help. And really girls panties and no one but his sister knew, ya right I don't care how big his dick is when that got he would be someone's bitch.

Good luck on the next story

chytownchytownover 12 years ago
Not this Time.

Did not like. Looking forward for your next story. Thanks for sharing.

cpetecpeteover 12 years ago

MS -this story was......different.

thanks for posting

Johnny1MJohnny1Mover 12 years ago
Some helpful criticism.

I don't like stories in which none of the characters are likable. Most readers don't. You might have pulled this off if were funnier, but instead of that we get panties and brother-sister incest. Both of which were done in non-erotic ways and were just kind of thrown out there. We get a horn dog with a husband abuser. What's to like here? I get it that you were pushing the envelope a little and having fun with the reader. Unfortunately, the reader didn't have any fun with the story.

greowulfgreowulfover 12 years ago
When I saw the first paragraph

I almost didn't read the rest. okkay, I still didn't read the rest, I only read the last few paragraphs to see if it was worth it. It wasn't. I'm a fan of all three types of LW endings you mention, when they're warranted. This was none of them. This was an attempt to gain a wider readership of incest and cross-dressing stories by trying to fit them in a square hole.

Atempt failed. You are technically a good writer, but please put your posts where they belong--or at least warn the reader.

MarvinSMarvinSover 12 years agoAuthor
Dear UndrApprctd

I see you have been a member of Literotica for a total of seven days now. You must be a really quick reader to be able to judge a story as being the "worst" on this site. I am sorry to don't like men to wear panties. However, it is a bit heartening to see that you think married people should respect their spouses and marriage. Joe after he reformed did indeed respect his marriage and was not exactly pleased to learn that his wife was unfaithful.

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