by GingerM
I have to say that your style is intriguing...a mix of science fiction, religiosity, and sex culminating in an inferno of images that stretch credulity, but paint a blatantly sexual theme...I love it!
Your discriptions were incredible. I could almost smell the brimstone. Obviously you must do a lot of writing. What else do you do?
Thank you!! Amazing story full of wickedness. Will you follow up with the exploits of ur new little succubus and her big sister?
Mm, this was a devilishly decadent story. ^_^ Your writing is so sensuous and well-written~ Keep on writing. >:)
@Anonymous - It's quite possible there will be more of 'Lilith.' Bear in mind that's not her real name, either; Melissa may have been foolish enough to give her true name, but 'Lilith' is far too experienced to fall for that trap. She might, for example, pull a pimp or a john down into her region of hell and share him with her pet...
Although I had to keep reminding my morals that it was just that...a story.
Great characters and slow seduction.
Have a smiley face. :)
an absolutely fabulous story that highlights the oh-so-sweet naughty tension between good and evil and all the sexual attraction of slow,sultry seduction
It really needs a continuation, or at least another story in this universe that you've created and we've only seen glimpses of.
@Anonymous, the most recent one.
You're entitled to your opinion, no matter how wrong it may be.
This story never gets old. It’s one of my favorites, and I haven’t found anything else like it yet.