All Comments on 'Fallen'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
that was way short

What were they being punished for? How were the people in the city reacting to them?

BiSmileyBiSmileyover 11 years agoAuthor
Expansion

I was planning on expanding the story, explaining a few of those things,

Call this a taste test:D

that I wasn't sure how well it'd be liked

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