All Comments on 'Fallen Angel'

This looks too be the beginning of a long and good series

I enjoyed the read. Only wish you had put a little more into it.

Don't stop writting. Gave it a 5.

Great story, but is this a repost? I am almost sure I have read this story before on Literotica.

There are a few stories with the name Fallen Angel but they are different to mine

That was very sexy, and rather moving. I like how real his reaction was to realizing what she was -- all nervous and perturbed. And I like that you made her a hermaphrodite -- most people wouldn't have.

I really hope you continue this story. I would totally read a series of this. Please, though, extend your sex scenes a bit more! This one is hot, but very short.