All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 09'

I'm getting hardcore reminders of a story call Paradise Lost now...

I just lo-ove Bridge.

He sounds so sweet!

Very well written. Your characterizations are wonderful. Love the pace and the slow revelations about the different characters.

I could wish the chapters were longer -- you 're such a tease! But at least you post often. Looking forward to more.

I just love Bridge, but wow, that Taz is something else, lol! Instead of being pissed or upset, lol... he wants to do it again! ;)

Thank you for your comments. It is GREAT fun them. And what on earth makes you think that a writer wouldn't want to read that their story is fun and cute. I think all the characters are cute, especially Bridge... and wait until you meet Serif... Phew. And it's supposed to be fun :)

Not probably the reaction the writer wants but this story is fun and cute.

I so love this story but so wish the chapters were longer,, next...