by Nephylim
best chapter I've read so far. Although I wish he killed Bridges dad too.
Luma did the right thing. These men were parasites, especially the doctor. I just hope Bridge lives because he is the sweetest of all your characters and he deserves a HEA after what was done to him.
I love the story...the ONLY complaint I have is that the chapters are way TOO short!!! I just get going and suddenly it is the end. Those 2 deserve what they got after what they did to Bridge!!!
Great entry. Neither of those men deserved to live after what they did to Bridge. You have a definite way with characters and I find myself truly caring about them all, but especially Bridge. I am enjoying this story a great deal and look forward to more. I do wish, however, that the entries were a bit longer.
This is a great story to begin with, but it is getting better and better. And, as "Anonymous" said, this chapter was very satisfying. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.