All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 14'

by Nephylim

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Anonymousabout 12 years ago

Yay Team Bridge

very satisfying

4catsrmine about 12 years ago

This is a great story to begin with, but it is getting better and better. And, as "Anonymous" said, this chapter was very satisfying. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.

cliffgirl08 about 12 years ago

Yay Luma

Glad he took out the trash.

avidreadr about 12 years ago

Great entry. Neither of those men deserved to live after what they did to Bridge. You have a definite way with characters and I find myself truly caring about them all, but especially Bridge. I am enjoying this story a great deal and look forward to more. I do wish, however, that the entries were a bit longer.

Gene63 about 12 years ago

I love the story...the ONLY complaint I have is that the chapters are way TOO short!!! I just get going and suddenly it is the end. Those 2 deserve what they got after what they did to Bridge!!!

toppsy0turvvy about 12 years ago

Yes, short but good

Luma did the right thing. These men were parasites, especially the doctor. I just hope Bridge lives because he is the sweetest of all your characters and he deserves a HEA after what was done to him.