All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 22'

This kind of cliffhanger is really cruel. How could you do this to us???!

I love this story, but I fear it is taking a turn I didn't want it to take. These cliffhangers are going to be the death of me. I can't wait for the next chapter.

If you don't want to wait for the next chapter of Fallen by Nephylim she has posted the completed version of her story on another site.

http://www.gayauthors.org/story/nephylim/Fallench

It's a great story and no waiting is awesome.

But it was crazy good.

Sorry for the delay guys, There were issues with moderation. I've posted the next two chapters to make up.