All Comments on 'Falling for a Friend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lucky Friend

All fiends should be so lucky! Love to read another chapter or two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
enjoyed it

nice one, girl. keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Get a Proofreader or Editor

I enjoyed the story but I winced as he kneed her shoulders. Ouch!!

And the "rapped" gift?? Something noisy I assume.

Please, please, let someone else read and edit your story before you post it. Spell checkers, while good, cannot detect incorrect homonyms.

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