All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 04'

i'm enjoying this story so far..i'm also looking forward to more from you..just wonderful

This is a helluva of a story ever written. I find myself immensely drawn into the plot. It's so refreshing! Not everything seems to be as it was to be. Who on eathw ould have though angels were to be suicide bombers? And here we were expecting mercy from the high and mighty...NOT! Codes! Serial number! What the hell was the author thinking??? Brilliant! I would say. Damn good story! Keep writing 'naturallysweet!

Why would she still not go with him? How upsetting!

Gah! She HAS to go with him! What the deuce?

never did i think i would be wishing an angel would chose to fall from grace but i am so mad that she pushed him away from her. i know there has to be more, pls continue.

are you serious? this sucks.

Do not listen to the jerk before me, your writing is amazing. It is a whole new take on Angels and Demons. It shows the different sides of both. There is not one being without good and bad in them, it is just different amounts. *hugs* I love it!!!!

By the way, why did she not go with him! He did all he could to save her and the Angels around the area. Besides, he sounds sooooo hot. :-P

~T

I hope this story will pick up and get more exciting as it so far takes a lot of time to read and actually nothing is happening. Boring. It´s quite beyond me that Athan is spending time with that stupid angel who does not know her own mind! No stars!