All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
you added more yay

i am enjoying this story so far.. i am looking forward to what happens next..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hi ns

You're doing a great job with cliff-hanger endings. Keep your story coming.

Leto

KillerRomanceKillerRomanceabout 15 years ago
Really good.

Great writing, fantastic plot. Keep the chapters coming(: <3 L.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
thank god we're finally on earth...

Chaps 9 and 10 were good. COndense the rest into four max chapters. redundant. pretty good while we're on earth though ;-)

Anonymous
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