by naturallysweet
i am enjoying this story so far.. i am looking forward to what happens next..
You're doing a great job with cliff-hanger endings. Keep your story coming.
Leto
Great writing, fantastic plot. Keep the chapters coming(: <3 L.
Chaps 9 and 10 were good. COndense the rest into four max chapters. redundant. pretty good while we're on earth though ;-)