All Comments on 'Falling Into the Woods Ch. 03'

for another submission- the tension between Lucas and Falls is great!

the medieval settings in this story with impeccable realisim. Excellent character development as well. I am very much looking forward to future installments.

This is not a comment on the story but it's a comment on the comment ONLY!

"You have depicted the medieval settings in this story with impeccable realism."

Does this include the absolute and utter slavery that was feudal system of medieval times? When people like you and I were tied to the land, we were not even a separate commodity, but simply a part of the land, just the same as a dung heap or the mud to be scraped off a boot!

Please don’t romanticize this era. The difference between the feudal serf and the African slave of the more modern times is nothing but skin colour …

I absolutely loved it, and I for one cannot bear the time waiting for the second chapter!

To the content:

And here I was thinking that Petterson was going to be her father - hm... must have been reading to much fiction hm?

I really liked the way they (Lucas and Amber) have their missunderstandings, even if it is hard to read from their spoken words which were understood by the other and which weren't... But old english on the other hand would be way to nasty to read and write properly... *g*

Again: Nice story, please carry on;

whr

-Shaya

I hope you you continue this soon- I am eagerly awaiting another chapter!

Although this isn't as hot as some of your other stories, I can tell that it is heating up and I am waiting to see what happens next! I really wish you would add the next chapter already!! Please?!

Loved the story; would love even more if you decided to continue it. I hope very much that you do. Take care.

You SO have to carry on with this series. I can tell that this is going to turn out great. Even though there havnt been many sex scenes yet, it is still really gripping. Keep up the gud work.

I'm sorry that no one appreciated this story. I have recently discovered your writing and like it. Than You.

What are the chances of you continuing this series all these years later? Or are there more chapters available elsewhere? I was completely drawn into in the tale and wish to read the rest. This has to be one of the most engrossing fantasy stories I've ever read. This was shaping up into a story worthy of publication. I am sure I am not alone in feeling this strongly about it. I would gladly purchase this in book form if it was available. In sure the rest of it would be as great as what I've read thus far.