All Comments on 'Falling Off The Horse'

a wonderful telling, and a nice resolution. A 5. This reader enjoyed the story very much.....perhaps a few too many coincidences at the close (their relationship would and could be just as happy without the brother, etc). But a great story, enjoyable and fun. Thanks........

What a tasty treat! Perhaps a little too much symmetry in the respective stories, but the pleasure--for the characters and for the readers--is in the discovery of how well-matched these two are, particularly in their capacities to enjoy bringing the other so much sexual pleasure. Really nice job!