by NeverHadTheChance
Only complaint I have is that the story is too short. I just prefer longer stories is all, but that's just me. Both the women have to get together with thier son's at some point. A 4-way, including the women having fun together as well. This story line has lots of sexy possibilities.
Is this just a story or based on real life??
Please Continue with both story lines, writing is great, Find both story lines great turn ons. Need to have families meet!
So far Chapter 1 ad 2 is logically developed and believable. As someone who, in real life, has no problem with mutually consensual incest, Jane's intrduction to incest does not meet the requirement of consensual. Mutually consenual incest is one in which there is no positional powerplay; there is no implied or actual fear of emotional abandonment; and/or no fear of or actual possibility of physical abuse. As for Jane's father, he is the perfect example of religious hypocrisy and the very antithesisof mutually consensual incest.