All Comments on 'Family Circle Ch. 01'

no way as soon as she entered the house and saw them she would have left james telling her to stop would have made no difference she would have left and maybe never talked to them again what you wrote here should be spread out over months not hours slow down and get a good editor and rewrite it properly

DBRS

I voted you a five on this story. I liked the storyline and the family love between Mary and her siblings was quite sexy and believable. Since it is a story of fiction, forget the derogatory comments on the storyline buildup. I quite enjoyed what you wrote and hope to read more chapters in this storyline. Thanks for taking the time to entertain me with your writing and keep up the great work. RDC.

What a beautiful and loving act between siblings

Hope you continue