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Click here"So, how was your shower? It seemed even longer than usual." Beth said with a laugh. She often complains that I take too long in the shower.
"Denise wasn't kidding when she said Katie gets worked up in the shower. It must have been infectious because she got me to the point where I lost control and just took her. It was very intense. Of course, I was more surprised when Cathy got in the shower after Katie and asked me to take her as well." Both Denise and Beth laughed.
"Oh honey, I know you've always thought of Cathy as being maybe a little prudish, but believe me, she's far from it. I just hope you enjoyed it." Beth said.
"Oh I did, it was quite amazing actually. I missed the sense of intimacy that I have with the two of you though. From a straight sex perspective though, wow." I said and both Beth and Denise gave me a poke. I just laughed.
"Where is everyone now?" Denise asked.
"Well, I guess Katie and I were rather loud in the shower. That's what prompted Cathy to come after me, it also made Melanie horny so she pulled David into the other bedroom. She was riding him hard when Cathy joined them, followed by Katie."
"Well, fuck." Denise said, much to mine and Beth's surprise. "I told them to include me in the next family meeting." She had a little pout on her lips, it was quite cute.
"You were kind of busy at the time you know." Beth said and Denise blushed slightly and smiled. "Why don't you go join them now?"
"Really? Ok, thanks." Denise gave Beth and me a kiss and darted out of our bedroom and into the other, not bothering to put any clothes on. Beth and I laughed and cuddled in together. I stared in her eyes for a few moments and we just let our feelings flow between us. I felt my cock twitch, this time it didn't drop back down right away.
"So," I said suggestively, "how you doin'?" Beth laughed and said not a chance. I kissed her and laughed as well, we cuddled close together and before we knew it had both drifted off to sleep.
- COMMENTS
lomar2almost 10 years agoAuthorI just wanted to thank everyone for their feedback and suggestions. For this story I actually wrote it as a single story, a little over 100k words in total. I decided to break in up into more manageable pieces. All of the parts were submitted at the same time, so it's too late for me to adjust or edit.
Some of the suggestions have been great and would definitely add something to the story. In the future, any long stories I write, I'll space the submissions a bit to gather feedback first, give myself a chance to benefit from the feedback.
I really appreciate the positive comments and constructive suggestions. Thanks
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoCould next chapter be the one where the family starts walking around each other's cabins topless or naked, putting on clothes only when walking between cabins or to go someplace else?
Will Trish be the one to wake up nude Beth and Josh? Will the rest of the family be fucking when they awake?
Cannot wait for the next chapter as all pretense for secrecy is gone and Dave currently has fucked the most women now that Denise has gone to her parents bedroom, naked.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis is a great story! I have one request though. I know Josh seems to be the main character, but for just a bit, could we see a part of the story just involving Cathy and her girls? I'm gettin wet thinking about it, and my gf will be the beneficiary of that. Kee it up!
Tarheels_Fanalmost 10 years agoThis story gets better with each chapter. 5 *'s for all of the so far.
Thank you for sharing
