All Comments on 'Family Holiday Ch. 01'

stupid. no one like this fag stuff

Seriously, if you want to be homophobic, do it elsewhere, anonymous.

i hope it gets a little more sexier in the next chapter.

I'm super confused as to who the narrator is, who all of the players are, and what their relationship to each other is. Jerry, Mike, Anne, Sandra, and the narrator seems to be the list, but their relationships are hard to work out. This story is a mess so far. I really hope the next chapter clears everything up, or I'm likely going to stop reading.