All Comments on 'Family Values'

Great story. More of the same, please

KEEP IT CUMMING(oops!)

Hot story! I loved it,cant wait for part 2.

Can't wait for Part II!!!

man what a hot story it was hot and exciting

I really enjoyed your story. The only problem I had was with the sizes of everyones body parts. It is OK to embelish a story... but you seemed to take extrodinary liberty. Other than that...well done

If you are going to describe so many body parts etc. all numbers under 100 should be spelled out except time and cash. Just a suggestion

Hi BC232,

Do you have plans to publish part 2 or have you published it on any other site?

Thank you,

Tia Tormen

Please write and let me know the answer:

tia

tormen

@

yahoo

com

great story

This started out great and the story rated a full five through page 6. After that the rest was barely a 3 with one not believeable scene followed by an even worse one. Just an example, the stepson would have been inside his stepmom within 2 minutes if his reality had anything to do human nature. No way he could have held back for a few hours. And where did the depraved shit come from?

Great start. Stupid finish.

It was a good story til I read "11 inches." Quit reading at that point.

I had to stop reading at the 1st bondage scene. Having the stepmother to have a forced orgasm for his own curiosity, and then punishing her for it. There are rules, and if you can't play by own rules, then you're not very good Dom. A sub must be able to trust you and feel safe. If not, then it's rape, plain and simple. I have learned a lot about BDSM from this site, and hope that anyone who reads this who may be interested in that kind of play don't get the wrong idea. Not trying to play police on a nice fantasy story, but that part just didn't sit right, and that kind of play can easily go off the rails,and get someone hurt fast.