All Comments on 'Fantasies Fulfilled Ch. 02'

Good story. Considering the humorous content though I think it should perhaps have been submitted under Humor & Satire.

humor and dialog -- I am agog sated and spent. Please do continue for should you not I doubt that I'll ever eat again.

She has the aroma of - sweat

and tastes of - acid

He tastes of - onion

In the after glow, when she regains consciousness,

the office smells of - poo

Then there are the Tags i.e.

smell - hairy - and desperate

You did a great job with the details. I could feel the characters and their emotions. Well done.