All Comments on 'Fantasy Fulfilled'

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LibertinemanLibertinemanover 9 years ago
Interesting

While a lot was left unsaid, it allowed the imagination to wander. Kind of like a cliffhanger, but no indication as to if it will continue. If it does, great. If it doesn't, still a fun read. Here's hoping he'll continue submitting stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
"They were hard as pebbles."

Do you know Magritte's painting, "The Pebble"?

It's easy to find online. It's delightful. A young woman licking her own shoulder, like a cat would do to itself. And "the pebble" isn't, I don't think, her nipple/s.

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