All Comments on 'Fantasy Vacation Ch. 15'

I have read all or these chapters, both couples were swinging but Mike and Terri were still in love with other. Now you have turned this into one big sex party. Your writting skill is great. But I was hoping to see some emotion between the husband and wife and between the boyfriend and girlfriend. their feeling for each other and where this thing is heading. I don't beleive either couple can go home and things ever be good or the same for them any more?

Slowly sinking into the slime of overkill - the wife cheats with a big cock - husband (wussie) loves it - unsure - maybe -he plays along for wack at girl friend - still unsure of anybody's feelings - implied fuckfest - but got to go home some day - now comes forth the gigundus black cock - gosh what suspense - next is the black gang bang - golly gee how erotic can you make it?

Well writen in most regards but trending downward - but wait till Ed gets his gigundusly enormous thick wide as barrel cock in his loving wife's ass - wow - unward and upward we go - or is it?

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