All Comments on 'Fantasy Vacation Ch. 21'

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gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
have loved these chapters

I have injoyed all these chapters, but it kind of like eating candy after a while its not as good as the first bite. When will we get to the part about feelings, I can't beleive all the people can do this with anyone feeling guilt or any jelousy..... come on a little realism goes a long way in makeing a story exciting all we have here is screwing and one big orgy.

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