All Comments on 'Far Too Hot'

Great. Please do more.

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

good start..lets see what happens next

your story made me feel so good, and I love a womans voice from england. if you like talking dirty on the phone. hmmmmmmmmm, :-)

You sound incredibly hot! I would love to spend about a month between your legs. I have some dessert on my chest for you.

Hot hot hot is all I can say!