by Cromagnonman
An interesting plot that is being developed at about the right pace. I do think you could have expanded the conversations between Cynthia, her solicitor and her husband because he missed most of it. Hopefully Cynthia's husband has a good plan in place to counter the illegal photos of Sam and Rebecca, because the sleazy Brownlow is obviously going to step over the line in his obsession to have Cynthia.
Oh, that's OK dear, I know I haven't been paying enough attention to you lately!!!
WTF!!! End of story over, it should have stayed lost.
I'm out of here.
Real people are the only ones this twisted heh -
is that the word i'm looking foe? cause at this point, the storyline has achieved surreal! what's worse, i'm enjoying this kaleidoscope of aussie irrationality.