All Comments on 'Farewell to the Dancing Man Ch. 25-29'

by Cromagnonman

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fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
incredulous?

is that the word i'm looking foe? cause at this point, the storyline has achieved surreal! what's worse, i'm enjoying this kaleidoscope of aussie irrationality.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
This is now getting too twisted to be a fantasy LOL

Real people are the only ones this twisted heh -

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Darling I just fucked that policeman!

Oh, that's OK dear, I know I haven't been paying enough attention to you lately!!!

WTF!!! End of story over, it should have stayed lost.

I'm out of here.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
DANCING QUEEN YOUNG AND GREEN

with envy and feeling lost. TK U MLJ LV NV

Sidney43Sidney43about 12 years ago

An interesting plot that is being developed at about the right pace. I do think you could have expanded the conversations between Cynthia, her solicitor and her husband because he missed most of it. Hopefully Cynthia's husband has a good plan in place to counter the illegal photos of Sam and Rebecca, because the sleazy Brownlow is obviously going to step over the line in his obsession to have Cynthia.

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