All Comments on 'Fashionably Late (For My Funeral)'

Is this a posting error or are there more parts?

But why no indication of following chapters, the story definitely alludes to much more to come.

I liked this story as I do most of Cromagnon's work however I am extremely disappointed. There is no ending! The reader is left up in the air way too much for my satisfaction. Like others I feel this is a set up for a sequel but please label the story as such. Don't leave your admiring readers wondering! I feel empty, incomplete and totally unsatisfied by the "up in the air" ending. I will hurry to add though that what is posted was well written. I can just see the bumbling dummy wandering around through life with his head in the clouds! LOL.

is never numbered in CM's stories. I just hope it doesn't take days or a week for the next chapter or the the rest. Good writing. Thanks.

On to the denouncement.... Melissa really never convinced me but then he showed that she was problematic in the opening paragraph. Anyway, it is a fine and enthralling tale. Congrats on breaking 100!

- always shines in the dark. As evidenced by the other comments the author succeeded - leave them panting for more. Also anticipating the continuation eye than kew.

always wrap themselves in with no escape holes and they never no who hunts and who preys. TK U MLJ LV NV

When do people get caught betraying his naive young ass LOL

i don't know why, but by the middle of the second page I just lost interest in this story. This is unusual as I generally like this authors tails.

A crime novel within a dramatic thriller.

Fingers crossed.

The character and plot building is excellent. I Iook forward to reading more of this tale.