All Comments on 'Fast Beginning'

Good Story, well written.

Makes me wish I was in Catherine's place.

So sensual and sexy ...

Couldn't stop reading it - Any name ideas for the next one??

Hope there is more to come

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brilliant. given me a few ideas ;)

well done.

Beautifully perfect.

nice story High fly!!!! I could totally relate to it!!!!

A very well- written, articulate and patient writer; this man knows what seduction is. Clearly. I love the detail of how they built their lust from words and foreplay. I felt like I was Catherine - which is the sign of good writing. And sensual erotic domination is so titillating - so much more so than the staging of being tied up.

I'd like to know more about how good she felt to him.

Because really - doesn't every woman want to believe that hers is the magic pussy?

Well done, More please!