All Comments on 'Fate Ch. 02'

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago
No no no!!!

Why oh why, please let Reed get hit by a mack truck before he gets to her house, I dislike him already.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Aw fuck!

I felt for the young couple when they were in the hospital. Now, I am REALLY scared for them. Something tells me, rough roads are ahead, thanks to this doctor. Especially because he said 'With her consent or without it.'

Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035over 13 years ago
I vote for a mack Truck also, maybe Skidding on Reeds Body

I love the Story and hate Doctor Reed. A professional like that preying on a young naive girl who just lost a baby. Please dont let the girl screw Reed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Agreed with good story, but hate doctor part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Story

I agree with everyone else. The Doctor needs to meet up with some of hers and Gage's friends or even her Father. Either way he won't last but maybe a few minutes. It would be less messy than it would be if he was hit with a Mac Truck. Just too bad that they can't send his no good ugly ASS to Lackland and let the trainees and the TI's use him for target practice.

mariasmdmariasmdover 13 years ago
wow

this is all so tragic!

im highly disturbed by this doctor,and i get the feeling that natasha is very naive. a strange dr. would not be my first choice of company in any occasion especially at at time like this!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Story So Far

Though she's about a dumb fuck. Sure she's vulnerable and the doctor's manipulating her but what a dumb bitch. I'm sure she wouldn't like Gage calling other females for companionship and sympathy. Hopefully she'll get her head out of her ass before it's to late. Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more!!!

please keep going with this story, i'm hooked now and something needs to be done about the creepy doctor!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

That is one messed up doctor. His complete obsession that quick after meeting her speaks of some major issues. Wouldn't surprise me if this wasn't the first time he's done something like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Uh-oh

Gage, whoop that doc's @$$ before he puts the moves on your girl!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Doctor ass

That doctor is horrible. I hate him.

SoCaliDudeSoCaliDudealmost 4 years ago
The doctor is a scumbag

The doctor should be fired for lack of ethics. To try to take advantage of a vulnerable patient who is engaged to a military man is deplorable.

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