All Comments on 'Father Lorrie'

One could do without the typos and the few malapropisms, but, of course, they are a minor distraction. The story's constructed well, and well, hits where its intended to hit . . .fine, succesful attempt.

Loved it please continue , it was so hot... more please!*giggles*

there were typos??? shit, I must have been too busy fucking myself senseless to notice lol

Man that was hot!!!!!!! ;-)~~

hey could you point out the typo's for me? I re-read it twice and couldn't find any either?

More to come, I hope???

are you fucking nuts !!! the Story was Fantastic,, who had time to look for typo's.. BRAVO!!! ENCORE!!!

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