All Comments on 'Father's Business Legacy'

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GagelessGagelessover 20 years ago
Proofread!!

Not a bad story. WOuld have been nice to see him join in.

Not enough actual sex though and you really need to read your story again before you submit it. THere are heaps of errors which, I know, are from carelessness and not because you dont know. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
not bad a try

not bad at all the story starts and ends abruptuly need more descreption the plot is real horny and nice ,more stories please dont give up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
good

good story

km

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
bakbaas hai

bakbaas hai

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
two in one

nice story , give some furthur plots, join man?!!

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