by mack_the_knife
If someone would have told me that a female dwarf could be sexy, I would have laughed at them. But you did in your story. Keep 'em cummin'. Next a wizardess with a Djinn?
I was a bit worried at first. But it turned out to be a very different cool addition. Whilst its not my favourite tale in your collection, still a very interesting read.
This is my favorite story of yours so far. I laughed out loud. It was sexy yet believable and even innocent somehow. I've wondered how dwarves and humans interact but noone tells stories about it. I'd love to read more of these two.
Just minimize the masculinity of Max a bit please. Strong women are great but a beard would be a bit much ;-)
Wow, I'm amazed by this loving portrait of a dwarf woman :) Interesting plot and very well carried out. Thank you! / Mal