All Comments on 'Ferrezoth Ch. 01'

by icehead

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great premise

Seems to be off to a good start. The sex scenes could use a little more depth. Can't wait for more.

Magus_RoninMagus_Roninover 13 years ago

I'm glad I finally made the time to read this, it was quite an enjoyable story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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