All Comments on 'Finally'

Great story. Cant wait for chapter two.

Well told with lots of good tension. Next chapter, please.

oops there's an underage kid in this story.

From the moment you had Alex open the door and see Nick bent over- sliding his jock down his legs- his perfectly muscled butt cheeks spread open and presenting his hot hole to Alex's grateful eyes.....etc.....I was hooked-- You did some great descriptive writing- I like that you paid attention to all parts of their young, strong bodies....and your description of the oral action was great stuff- you made me want to see and taste nick- you made him sound so good.

I hope you write some more with these guys- and maybe some of their team mates.

Thanks for sharing

A very good, short n sweet story

Chapter 2 please