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Click hereOf course the bait you use is key. Live is best, but a good decoy usually brings big results too.
It really is as simple as that. Know your prey, draw them out, only reveal yourself after the shot is made.
In the pages of this book you will discover all you need to know on how to become an effective hunter, no matter what the animal.
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END OF PART SEVEN AND THE NOVEL SO FAR.
TO ANYONE WHO HAS READ THIS FAR I THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR DOING SO. THIS NOVEL IS FOR PEOPLE LIKE YOU. I HOPE YOU ENJOYED READING A NOVEL AS IT IS ACTUALLY WRITTEN.
I'D LOVE TO BE ABLE TO JUST KNOCK OUT THE REST OF IT RIGHT AWAY FOR YOU, BUT IF I DID THAT THEN THE FINISHED WORK WOULDN'T BE OF THE STANDARD I'M STRIVING FOR.
I HOPE YOU CAN APPRECIATE HOW MUCH CARE I'VE TAKEN WITH THIS. IT'S A PSYCHOLOGICAL JOURNEY THAT CAN'T BE RUSHED. I HAVE EVERY TWIST AND TURN OF THIS STORY WRITTEN AND COMPLETED IN MY HEAD, BUT TRULY GETTING THAT ACROSS IS NO SIMPLE MATTER.
THE JOURNEY OF ASHLEY/GABRIELLE IS A PROCESS, AS SHE CHANGES THEN SO MUST THE READER. UNDERSTANDING (AND EVEN SHARING IN) PROFOUND CHANGE IS A TIME CONSUMING PROCESS, BUT THE PAYOFF IS REWARDING IN WAYS UNKNOWN TO THOSE WHO NEVER COMMIT TIME OR EFFORT.
Oh -- and no apologies whatsoever for the final paragraph (section 12). I'm thinking that for those that have gone to the trouble of reading all of the book so far, that final paragraph probably resulted in a lot of people saying "OH FUCK!" (actually i'm debating cutting it in the next draft) -- What can I say, It's gonna be a rollercoaster ride from here on in. Just knowing what I have in store for you guys put a big ol smile on my face.
- COMMENTS
Dimachaerusalmost 10 years agoAuthorWell, Dragon Angel, as co-incidence would have it, I have read some you your work also. In fact, you are the only author on my favourite list (im not sure if that is what lead you to my work or if it was serendipity). So, your opinion is something I would definitely value.
Yes there is more of this book that hasn't been submitted yet, but I haven't gone back to it for a while because it requires me to go to a dark place (although it's an exciting place too). Every twist and turn is mapped out in my head, but conveying that emotion and feeling can be all consuming, and so I'm almost reluctant to continue...I sense you understand this more than most.
SirsDragonalmost 10 years agoI'm only about halfway through, but truly amazing work. I would be happy to provide you a sub's viewpoint on the story if you're interested.
Anonymousover 10 years agoThank you for your post:) I'm happy that you haven't given up on this incrredible story, which I couldn't put down once I had started reading! I can completely understand the need for a break as your task ahead is a difficult one, but I truly believe you're seriously talented. I selfishly hope you'll start writing again soon:)
Dimachaerusover 10 years agoAuthorThanks dreamy_siren. You are very kind. I'm also very flattered that the story so far is still rating at 4.21 because particularly toward the end of part seven all I see now is rushed ideas and perhaps some bad writing...the rest of it im still proud of but it's very much a work in progress...I've taken a long break from it because writing this has been a challenging experience...from here the twists only get darker as Ash gets slowly consumed by her own desire and obsession. The surrender of a good woman to her baser nature..knowing the danger..swallowed whole by the same dark world that took her friend..submitting to it willingly despite knowing the only possible outcome...thats the idea that's driving this story for me.
